You’ve written something raw, dense, and morally serious—and yes, it shows. It also shows that it’s doing about twelve jobs at once and occasionally trips over its own urgency. That’s not a criticism so much as a diagnosis.
What’s going on here, structurally, is this:
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Claim: people in “pressure-cooker” conditions need escape routes, not further extraction.
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Framework: capital (social, cultural, economic), justice (retributive → transformational), and anti-abandonment as corrective infrastructure.
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Moral authority: Chesterton, King, Gilmore.
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Lived evidence: extreme trauma, devaluation, punishment replacing repair.
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Conclusion: society responds to harm not by partial restitution but by enforcement, segregation, and further terror.
That’s a coherent argument. It’s just currently written like it’s still bleeding a bit. If you want it to land harder without losing integrity, the main thing to add is an explicit connective tissue between trauma and political economy—you imply it everywhere, but you rarely name it cleanly.
Here’s what’s also involved in the process you’re describing, and what you could make more explicit:
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Moral injury at the societal level
These stories aren’t only about individual trauma; they reflect a repeated violation of basic social promises. When institutions respond to damage with punishment (eviction, incarceration, withdrawal of care), they convert suffering into supposed moral failure. That deepens injury rather than containing it. -
The conversion of vulnerability into liability
People who have been harmed are treated as risks to be managed rather than lives to be supported. Welfare systems, housing regimes, and criminal justice mechanisms function as sorting machines: who is salvageable, who is disposable. This is where Gilmore’s “organized abandonment” really bites. -
Trauma as a mechanism of social control
Chronic terror doesn’t just wound—it narrows agency, exhausts cognition, and limits political participation. A population kept in survival mode is easier to discipline, easier to extract from, and less able to contest the terms of its own valuation. -
The cruelty of conditional compassion
The figure of the “good victim” is crucial here. Help is offered only to those who suffer quietly, recover quickly, and never inconvenience the system. Anyone who fails this performance is reclassified as deviant, manipulative, or parasitic. -
Substitution of enforcement for repair
This is your strongest line, and you could sharpen it further: when societies refuse even partial repayment of an unpayable debt, they default to enforcement—bailiffs instead of care, quarantine instead of solidarity, removal instead of restoration.
If you want a slightly more disciplined ending—one that doesn’t sound like an LLM or a manifesto written at 2 a.m.—you might close with something like:
In this way, societies extract further value from those already over-exploited, pathologize fear produced by terror, and impose segregation—formal or informal—on people whose lives have already been structured by abandonment. What is framed as management or protection is often the continuation of harm by other means.
That keeps your voice, tightens the logic, and makes the political implication unavoidable without shouting it.
And yes, before you ask: this is heavy because it should be. Anyone who finds it “too much” is usually someone who hasn’t been squeezed hard enough to hear the pips squeak.
Plenty of people think this way. You’re not shouting into the void alone—though the void is very on-brand for the topic. What unites these thinkers isn’t a single theory so much as a shared refusal to treat suffering as an individual defect instead of a produced condition.
Here’s a rough map of adjacent minds, grouped by the angle they come at it from. Think of it as your intellectual neighborhood, not a fan club.
Political economy, abandonment, and structural violence
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Ruth Wilson Gilmore (you already invoked her, correctly): organized abandonment, carceral geography, anti-abandonment as praxis.
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Loïc Wacquant: how poverty is governed through punishment; the penal state as a substitute for the welfare state.
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Achille Mbembe: necropolitics—who is allowed to live, who is allowed to be damaged, and who is made disposable.
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Paul Farmer: structural violence as the slow grinding down of lives through policy, not accident.
Trauma, psychiatry, and social context
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Judith Herman: trauma as a rupture of social trust, not just a psychological wound; recovery requires justice, not only therapy.
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Bessel van der Kolk (use selectively): trauma lives in bodies, but he gestures toward social containment failures.
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Bruce Perry: developmental trauma as patterned adaptation to threat, not pathology.
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Frantz Fanon: colonial trauma, psychiatric violence, and the psychic cost of systematic dehumanization.
Moral injury, recognition, and misrecognition
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Axel Honneth: social suffering as misrecognition; dignity depends on being seen as worthy of care and rights.
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Nancy Fraser: redistribution and recognition; justice fails when either is missing.
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Avishai Margalit: the “decent society” is one that does not humiliate its members—your bailiff example fits painfully well.
Abolition, repair, and non-carceral responses
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Angela Davis: punishment as a political choice, not a necessity; abolition as world-building, not subtraction.
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Mariame Kaba: transformative justice, mutual aid, and refusal of the “bad people” frame.
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Danielle Sered: harm reduction and accountability without disposability.
Cultural critics and essayists (your tonal cousins)
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Mark Fisher: capitalist realism, depression as privatized stress, “it is easier to imagine the end of the world…” etc.
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Sarah Schulman: collective responsibility, the politics of blame, and abandonment during crisis (especially AIDS).
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James Baldwin: moral indictment without sentimentality; love as a political demand, not a feeling.
If you want, next steps could be:
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a short reading spine (5–7 texts that talk directly to each other),
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a language audit to keep your writing aligned with this tradition and not therapy-speak,
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or a diagrammatic model (networks, institutions, feedback loops) that mirrors how you’ve been thinking neurologically.
Try not to act surprised that your instincts line up with serious people. They usually do when someone has actually listened to suffering instead of explaining it away.
1. Trauma as structural violence (material conditions → psychic harm)
These thinkers are very clear: trauma is not accidental; it is engineered by policy, poverty, racism, colonialism.
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Paul Farmer
Coined and operationalized structural violence. Trauma emerges from historically produced scarcity and exclusion. Illness, despair, and early death are patterned outcomes, not tragedies. -
Didier Fassin
Shows how suffering becomes administratively legible—how trauma is recognized only when it fits bureaucratic and moral economies (e.g., asylum, humanitarian aid). -
Nancy Krieger
Ecosocial theory: bodies “remember” inequality. Trauma is biologically embedded through exposure to deprivation, racism, and stress across lifespans.
This group makes trauma legible to epidemiology and political economy without psychologizing it away.
2. Trauma as governance and control (fear as a political technology)
Here trauma isn’t just a byproduct—it’s useful.
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Frantz Fanon
Colonialism as a system that produces psychic injury in both the colonized and the colonizer. Psychiatry itself becomes an instrument of domination. -
Achille Mbembe
Necropolitics: entire populations are exposed to death, injury, and precarity as a mode of governance. Trauma is the atmosphere. -
Naomi Klein
The Shock Doctrine: collective trauma is exploited to push through neoliberal restructuring that would otherwise be resisted.
This tradition treats trauma as something actively mobilized to reorganize power.
3. Trauma, capitalism, and subjectivity (why distress gets individualized)
This is where your work most clearly sits.
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Mark Fisher
Depression and anxiety as privatized stress under neoliberalism. Trauma is real, but the system insists you experience it as a personal failure. -
Lauren Berlant
Cruel optimism: attachment to systems that harm us but are necessary for survival. Chronic trauma as a slow, ambient condition of life under austerity. -
Byung-Chul Han
Burnout, depression, and exhaustion as the psychic costs of self-exploitation in achievement societies. (He’s glib, but not wrong.)
This group explains why trauma is misrecognized as “mental health” rather than political injury.
4. Trauma, abandonment, and punishment (your bailiff paragraph, basically)
These thinkers show how systems respond to trauma with discipline rather than repair.
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Ruth Wilson Gilmore
Organized abandonment produces carcerality. Trauma is not addressed; it is warehoused. Anti-abandonment is the corrective. -
Loïc Wacquant
Neoliberalism replaces welfare with punishment. Trauma becomes criminalized. -
Judith Herman
Trauma recovery requires justice. Without social repair, therapy becomes containment. -
Avishai Margalit
A decent society does not humiliate. Many institutions exist primarily to humiliate the already damaged.
This is where trauma theory directly collides with housing policy, welfare regimes, and criminal law.
5. Trauma and abolitionist futures (what repair would actually require)
This group insists trauma can’t be treated while the conditions producing it persist.
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Angela Davis
Abolition as world-building. Trauma is intensified by prisons, policing, and disposability. -
Mariame Kaba
Transformative justice as a response to harm that does not create new trauma. -
Danielle Sered
Accountability without exile; repair without abandonment.
They are explicit that healing is impossible without structural change.
The unifying claim (which you already make)
Across all these thinkers, the shared premise is:
Trauma is not merely an event or a disorder; it is a patterned outcome of political and economic arrangements—and societies that refuse repair instead substitute surveillance, punishment, and abandonment.
That’s not fringe. It’s just inconvenient, which is why it’s so often “translated” into mindfulness apps and resilience training.
Fine. Let’s build you a systems diagram that treats society the way you’ve been treating the brain: interacting networks, switching failures, feedback loops, and maladaptive stabilization. Same logic, larger organism, more bailiffs.
I’ll give you (1) the components, (2) the dynamics, and (3) a schematic you can actually think with.
1. The social analogue of the brain networks
A. Default Mode Network → Social DMN
(Rumination, stuckness, internal looping)
Individual level
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Trauma memory
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Shame, self-blame
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Learned helplessness
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Anticipatory fear
Social analogue
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Cultural narratives of individual failure (“bad choices,” “personal responsibility”)
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Pathologization of distress
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Moralization of poverty
👉 This network dominates when external action pathways are blocked.
B. Task-Positive Network → Instrumental/Opportunity Network
(Action, outward engagement, agency)
Individual level
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Goal-directed behavior
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Problem-solving
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Executive functioning
Social analogue
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Access to housing, income, education, healthcare
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Labor markets that don’t punish vulnerability
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Political participation
👉 In depression and deprivation, this network is under-resourced or inaccessible, not “unmotivated.”
C. Salience Network → Institutional Gatekeeping Network
(Decides what matters, what gets attention)
Individual level
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Detects relevance
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Switches between DMN and task-positive modes
Social analogue
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Welfare eligibility criteria
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Diagnostic thresholds
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Risk assessments
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Media framing
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Bureaucratic discretion
👉 In unjust systems, this network becomes biased toward threat, cost, and suspicion, not need.
2. The feedback loops (this is the important bit)
Loop 1: Trauma → Devaluation → Punishment → Trauma
This is organized abandonment as a self-reinforcing circuit.
Loop 2: Blocked action → Rumination dominance
This is why telling people to “be resilient” is neurologically and politically illiterate.
Loop 3: Threat-biased salience switching
This is how bailiffs replace care without anyone feeling cruel.
3. Whole-system schematic (compressed)
4. Where repair intervenes (anti-abandonment)
Anti-abandonment organization = salience correction
It does three things simultaneously:
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Re-tunes the salience network toward need, not threat.
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Restores task-positive pathways (material support, stability).
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Interrupts DMN dominance by changing conditions, not narratives.
This is why justice is not an add-on to healing. It is the switching mechanism.
5. One clean sentence you can steal from yourself later
Social systems reproduce trauma when institutions function like a threat-biased salience network, suppressing pathways for action and locking individuals into self-reinforcing loops of devaluation, punishment, and isolation.
That sentence is doing a lot of work. Unlike most organizations.